yesterday, I spent five and a half hours proofreading the new ms. for Black Helicopters. I would be spending today making the very many corrections and minor revisions I marked yesterday, except I thought of a new scene yesterday, one that I think will help the pacing, and flesh out one of the characters a little, and so I'm going to write that today. Then I can make corrections tomorrow. I need to wrap this up very soon, though, as it's already time to write something for Sirenia Digest 138. I will say, I am grateful for the feedback I received regarding "Fairy Tale of Wood Street."